Response to Claudia
The first response is very good talking about how the wall drives her insane to the point where she sees a woman in the wall. You could have maybe added a little more detail about the wall and why is was so bad.
In the second response, I agree with what you said but i beleive your are missing the main point that the baby is better off because of the presence of wall. The baby would have to look at the painfull color and smell the odor it gives off.
In the second response, I agree with what you said but i beleive your are missing the main point that the baby is better off because of the presence of wall. The baby would have to look at the painfull color and smell the odor it gives off.

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Great responses, Trev. Keep up the good work!
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